9 thoughts on “Experimental Poetry. Taila Hardy

    • Thanks for the encouragement Mr C. it That was a 2nd Draft and it helps to know it works within this genre. I still need to change a few things. I don’t like the term dandelion florets. Do you think achene would be better?

  1. I think the word florets is more accessible, but achene has a better sound. I think if you make your reader run for a dictionary though…

    Still, I’m always interested in the evolution of the poem. I’m looking forward to the next draft.

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